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Seep by ~airmega23:iconairmega23:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




Seep

Sleeping on the floor;
The wood it cuts my skin.
I begin to bleed;
on floor and within.
Nothing as it seems,
as blood rips through dreams.
and I begin to weep,
I begin to seep away.

As darkness fades from sight;
I breathe it in the air.
Little left to see,
blank becomes my stare.
Colors start to fade.
This fate I have made,
I’m ending all alone.

You lay down with me;
a tear rolls down your cheek.
Shame is what you feel,
for loving one so weak.
Nothing left to do,
glazed eyes facing you.
As you begin to weep,
I begin to creep away;
from you.
©2004-2009 ~airmega23
:iconairmega23:

Author's Comments

I have been writing this in my head for a couple weeks, and tonight it finally came out onto paper. Its been 2 months since I have wrote anything half-decent. I hope you will get some meaning out of this, as I put my soul into these words.
I am full empathy, so much pain I feel isn't my own. My life is great, friends, family, great girlfriend, money, love...but I cannot really enjoy it as I am decayed by the guilt of having so much good, while others have little or none.
This is not me, I do not feel suicidal in the least right now. Those days are behind me, but I am feeling the emotions of someone else right now. My words, their pain...

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~imaverydisturbedgirl Jun 19, 2004, 9:27:22 PM
i at a loss of words for this...
:iconsevencrimsonlies:
~SevenCrimsonLies Jun 19, 2004, 9:27:45 PM
beautiful....simply beautiful....gah...why is everything beautiful...wow...uh...beautiful....*cry s*
:iconjymc:
~jymc Jun 19, 2004, 9:28:09 PM
<3

That's really good.
:iconairmega23:
~airmega23 Jun 19, 2004, 9:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot
I am glad you liked it

--
To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:iconjymc:
~jymc Jun 19, 2004, 9:32:59 PM
You're welcome. I'm glad you wrote it.
:iconairmega23:
~airmega23 Jun 19, 2004, 9:33:58 PM
Thanks
Im glad it touched you

--
To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:iconairmega23:
~airmega23 Jun 19, 2004, 9:34:43 PM
....ummm...okay....thanks

--
To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:iconairmega23:
~airmega23 Jun 19, 2004, 9:35:08 PM
me too
Its been a while...

--
To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
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~ohBOBlyone Jun 19, 2004, 9:35:30 PM
Greg, this is.....amazing I mean....wow:clap:

--
You don't die from a broken heart -
you only wish you did.

Use me ~OhBOBlyone-Stock
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