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Counterfeit Prospective by ~airmega23:iconairmega23:





Counterfeit Prospective

Sit back
take a break,
working hard; a mistake.
Come sit down,
and laugh with me;
such a joy it is; too be free.

I don't think I really know
I don't think I really know
I don't think I really know
I don't think you really know

In the end, no one saves us.
They've forgotten,
They've betrayed us.
We're hopeless,
without purpose.
No, I am never nervous.

I don't care,
if I pass the test,
I'm no good, at what I do best.
I want to stay,
waste time here;
it'll only last, another year.

I don't think I really know
I don't think I really know
I don't think I really know
I don't think you really know

In the end, no one saves us.
They've forgotten,
They've betrayed us.
We're hopeless,
without purpose.
No, I am never nervous.

My family died
they got a divorce;
circumstance my driving force.
It's not my fault,
but I'll take the blame.
everything's changed; it's all the same.

I don't think I really know
I don't think I really know
I don't think I really know
I don't think you really know
©2004-2009 ~airmega23
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Author's Comments

I tried to show the apathy of our generation with this piece. Some things may not make sense, but I really don't care...
Hope you relate...
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woa..Thats emotional in meny ways..nice ^^

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DeathStar: Every light cast a shadow :nirvana:

Hope is so much closer to beauty then sorrow ~ blindside

Noiren: Takes one, to teach one..
:iconkittiefanclub: Kittie :mwuhaha:
I've said it once, and I'll say it again. Good work, bud. I think you did really well on this. Might not be your best work, but it's darn good. Hope to see more by you soon.

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i like pie.
Thanks so much!
I am really glad you liked my poem. It really means alot...

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
Thanks Judd, as always

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
as always, wondrfull. lots of emotion...i like it alot.:clap:

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You don't die from a broken heart -
you only wish you did.

Use me ~OhBOBlyone-Stock
Nice. Very touching. I feel I can relate.

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Love,
Sandy:rose:
Thanks so much!

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
I am glad you were able to relate, that was my purpose....

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]
:hug:

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]

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